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François-Philippe Champagne

99 words · 6 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Greg Fergus (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada is one of the world’s largest food producers. However, too much of the food we produce is processed abroad, and too many Canadians still rely on high‑priced imports. Canadian farmers deserve more options for selling their products, and Canadians deserve more choices about where they buy their food. Could the Minister of Finance tell us how the first‑ever national food security strategy will help us produce and process more food right here in Canada, so that more Canadian food ends up on our plates and more money—”
Statement grade
B+
80 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 29%Positioning 14%Claims 57%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 29 wordsI would like to begin by thanking the member for Hull—Aylmer for his question and for all his leadership. I am sure that my colleagues will agree with me.Thanks Positioning · 3 wordsHe is right.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsLast week, we unveiled the national food security strategy, 1because we know that food security is a top priority for Canadians.Partly on point Positioning · 11 wordsThese are flagship measures that will please everyone, even the Conservatives: PositioningClaims · 35 words$1 billion for food infrastructure, terminals and hubs, 2as well as $750 million to ensure that Canadians have access to more Canadian‑grown fruits and vegetables all year long.3 There are also measures to spur competition—

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