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Dane Lloyd

96 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Guillaume Deschênes-Thériault (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, the Conservative Party used to call itself the party of law and order. Unfortunately, today, the Conservatives no longer have any credibility on this issue. When the time comes to better protect victims, what do the Conservatives do? They vote against it. When the time comes to combat hate crimes in our communities, they vote against it. That is not to mention all the disinformation they have been spreading on the matter. When the time comes to debate Bill C‑22 to give the authorities the tools they need to fight crime, what do they do? They filibuster. I would like to hear the thoughts of my colleague opposite. What does he think about the fact that his party no longer has any credibility when it comes to keeping our communities safe and getting tough on crime?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 26%Claims 74%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 17 wordsthat is a loaded question, but coming from that member and that party, it is quite ironic.Positioning Claims · 71 wordsThe Conservatives are not the party that gutted mandatory minimums and brought forward legislation that made bail mandatory for violent repeat offenders.12 We are not the party that has overseen a rise in violent crime and extortion of over 55%.3Logical leapLogical leap It is a direct result of the current Liberal government’s policy. The Liberals call themselves a new government. They have been in power for 11 years, 4and that is their record. Positioning · 8 wordsConservatives will not take any lessons from them.PositioningOff point

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