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Sherry Romanado

62 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Simon-Pierre Savard-Tremblay (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to ask my colleague a question. By the way, I hold her in high regard, but my question has nothing to do with that. How does she feel about the fact that, for weeks, we have been doing our committee work and now, when the majority of committee members have worked to get amendments adopted, the government is doing everything it can to undo what has been done? Is this not a slap in the face to democracy? Has the majority gone to the Liberals’ heads?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Greeting 27%Positioning 15%Claims 58%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordsI thank my colleague for his question and also for the work we do together in committee.Greeting Positioning · 9 wordsMy priority is the women and men in uniform.Positioning Claims · 36 wordsThe chief of the defence staff has had conversations with over 14,000 Canadian Armed Forces members and victims, 1and they have made it very clear that these cases need to be transferred to the civilian system.2Off point

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