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Sherry Romanado

170 words · 15 sentences · 21 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I very much appreciate the words the member has spoken. Through the debate already this morning, one of the greatest concerns I have is that the Conservative Party seems to be saying Justice Arbour’s recommendations are limited and have timed out, in essence, and that there is no obligation for us to respond to that report. Justice Arbour did an incredible job for members of the CAF, recognizing the importance of the issue, and came back with a specific recommendation. My understanding is that this is the primary recommendation, from a justice who canvassed many members of the CAF. If the member could comment in regard to the Conservative Party just throwing that report—”
Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
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Procedure 14%Claims 69%Positioning 18%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 23 wordsit is actually very appropriate to read the preface to Justice Arbour’s report into the record, because it still rings true. It says: ProcedureOff pointClaims · 117 wordsThousands of Canadians have served, 1and continue to serve, with honour in one of the country’s most prestigious organizations: the Canadian Armed Forces.... Many, however, were denied that chance. Members of the LGBTQ2+ community were purged.2Hidden agency Members of Indigenous and black communities, and other visible minorities and equity-seeking groups, have been largely absent, clearly not welcome. For years, women were simply shut out.3 When finally allowed to serve, women were made to feel they did not belong. They were denied opportunities to compete fairly and to thrive. They were harassed, humiliated, abused and assaulted, and, appallingly, many continue to be targeted today.4Hidden agency Things have changed in the Canadian Armed Forces for the better. We cannot go back. Positioning · 30 wordsFor the victims who never came forward, out of fear of retribution, out of fear for their lives, today is for them. We heard them. We listened. We are there.PositioningVague promise

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