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Chris Malette

86 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Sherry Romanado (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker. I would like to thank my colleague for his great work on the national defence committee. I would like the member to elaborate a bit about what we heard in terms of members of the Canadian Armed Forces who would not come forward to file complaints out of fear of retribution and that their careers would be limited, and that is why we brought forward Justice Arbour’s recommendation.”
Statement grade
B+
80 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 6%Claims 22%Anecdote 40%Reasoning 33%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 5 wordsthat is an excellent question.Procedure Claims · 19 wordsWe heard testimony on a different report at the national defence committee yesterday on francophones in the armed forces, 1Anecdote · 34 wordsand one of the members who testified had testified earlier. This was an officer who, in Afghanistan, was sexually assaulted, 2but failed to report because the assailant in this case was a superior officer.Anecdote Reasoning · 28 wordsThat goes to the crux of why we are making these changes. It is due to a reluctance or fear of reporting because of the chain of command.

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