“Mr. Speaker, I fundamentally disagree with the member’s assessment. I think that he undervalues the many discussions that Justice Arbour would have had with victims. We are not talking about a few dozen; we are talking about hundreds, directly, and indirectly through the Canadian Forces, we are talking about thousands. I believe that the Conservative Party has marginalized those victims. There is a reason Justice Arbour came forward with that recommendation. I cannot recall the Conservatives ever asking a question that contradicted the recommendation that Justice Arbour brought forward, and it has been there for four years. Has this member, or any Conservative, asked a question about that?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 56 wordsthe member, a veteran himself, knows very well that, in the military, with a top-down chain of command, culture can change very fast, Unearned certaintybecause it is an order-based society.Off pointThe Arbour report is several years old, 1and the culture did not stop to wait for the Arbour report.Right away, the military started the culture change, The question · 13 wordsand you know that very well.Unearned certaintyYou know that if you go back—Off point
