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Jean-Denis Garon

198 words · 9 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 71 / 100
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Claims 48%Positioning 24%Thanks 28%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 15 wordsthis year marks the 50th anniversary of the Chambre de commerce et d’industrie de Mirabel.1 Positioning · 10 wordsThis is a major milestone that deserves to be acknowledged.Positioning Claims · 42 wordsFor 50 years, Mirabel’s chamber of commerce has been deeply involved in the community. Since I was elected in 2021, I have seen an organization that listens to its members, that is innovative and that is essential to the region’s economic development.2 Positioning · 22 wordsIt is able to pool Mirabel’s strengths, whether in agriculture, aeronautics or its many SMEs, and build strong ties between these sectors.Positioning Claims · 39 wordsIt is no coincidence that it was nominated for an award this year by the Fédération des chambres de commerce du Québec in the categories of recruitment and chamber of the year for organizations with up to 400 members.3 Positioning · 15 wordsThis recognition confirms the calibre of its work and its tangible impact on the ground.Positioning Thanks · 55 wordsI would like to commend all the directors who have served on its board over the years, as well as the executive director, Geneviève Brault-Sabourin, and her entire team. On behalf of the people of Mirabel, I congratulate the chamber of commerce on its 50th anniversary, and I hope for at least 50 more years.Thanks

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