Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Robert Oliphant

149 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
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Claims 58%Positioning 21%Anecdote 21%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 15 wordsDon Valley West is home to the largest community of Shia Ismaili Muslims in Canada.1 Positioning · 26 wordsThis vibrant community is made up of thousands of engaged, committed Canadians who make our city and our country richer in every sense of the word.Positioning Anecdote · 32 wordsRecently, I was honoured to join His Highness the Aga Khan and members of the community to celebrate the inauguration of Generations Toronto, a new not-for-profit intergenerational community in Don Valley West.2Anecdote Claims · 71 wordsComprising 390 affordable rental homes, 122 long-term care residences, on-site health care, an early learning centre, space for prayer and community programming, this project represents the best of our efforts to build vibrant and affordable housing: 3a generational project for several generations to live together. This investment of $130 million through the apartment construction loan program is one example of our federal government providing affordable housing solutions for Canadians in need.4 Positioning · 5 wordsWe are building Canada strong.PositioningVague promise

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