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Marie-Gabrielle Ménard

73 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Sandra Cobena (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the CFIB has sounded the alarm on the entrepreneurial drought in Canada for six consecutive quarters. More businesses have shut down than opened up. The Montreal Economic Institute has said that “the heartbeat of innovation, job creation and economic growth...is in sharp decline”. Small businesses spend about 250 hours per year on red tape that could be eliminated, and it would not even cost the government a single dollar. Will the minister admit that the Liberals’ tax-and-spend approach has failed and get out of the way so that our businesses can thrive?”
Statement grade
C–
55 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 15%Claims 70%Promise 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordsof course, I share my colleague’s concern for our small businesses.Positioning Claims · 31 wordsCanada is home to one million businesses employing six million Canadians.1 I have just finished a series of round-table discussions, and we are working with SMEs to help them get export-ready.Vague promise Promise · 11 wordsSmall businesses will have their place in Canada’s defence industrial strategy.2Off pointVague promise Claims · 20 wordsThe Canadian Federation of Independent Business welcomed the suspension of the excise tax.3 That also supports small businesses in Canada.

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