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Marie-Gabrielle Ménard

72 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Sandra Cobena (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, entrepreneurs need a direct and clear answer. The CFIB estimates that the total regulatory cost of government is $52 billion. Businesses are burning through a collective 768 million hours annually on paperwork. Just this week, I met with businesses that have heard Liberal promises for almost a decade. They are asking if the Liberals could just leave the starting line and do something. Will the Liberals commit today to cutting their red tape taxes and government spending, so that businesses can actually thrive in our country?”
Statement grade
C
Average 62 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 6%Claims 49%Positioning 46%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 4 wordswe have been clear.ProcedureOff pointUnearned certainty Claims · 20 wordsThat is part of the strategy to support small business. Part of our approach involves reducing red tape for businesses.Vague promise Positioning · 10 wordsObviously, I do not entirely agree with my colleague’s statement.Positioning Claims · 15 wordsI consult with small business owners every week to understand what they are going through. Positioning · 23 wordsMy sense is that the transformation that we are currently undertaking is helpful and gives our small businesses hope for a bright future.PositioningOff point

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