“Mr. Speaker, Build Canada Homes is Canada’s affordable housing builder, and it is already delivering real results. It is working with partners to accelerate the construction of affordable homes across Canada, including right here in Ottawa. In just a few short months, we are already seeing progress, with the fast-tracking of eight shovel-ready projects in growing neighbourhoods. Can the Minister of Housing and Infrastructure please update the House on the momentum that the partnership between Build Canada Homes and the City of Ottawa is delivering?”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 50 wordsthere is exciting news this morning here in Ottawa.I was proud to be at a construction site with the Prime Minister and the mayor to announce those eight shovel-ready projects.1There will be over 1,100 homes.2Over 90% of those are affordable homes by the Build Canada Homes’ standard.3Procedure · 4 wordsThis is great news.ProcedurePositioning · 12 wordsWe are building at scale.We are prioritizing projects on the ground.PositioningClaims · 14 wordsWe are building these deep partnerships, in this case at the City of Ottawa, Promise · 10 wordsand looking forward to continuing to build that good work.Vague promise