Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Taleeb Noormohamed

1670 words · 70 sentences · 89 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 96 / 100
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Greeting 1%Claims 41%Reasoning 45%Procedure 1%Positioning 4%Promise 7%The ask 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 21 wordsit is wonderful to be back in this place with my colleagues after an important summer of conversations in our communities.Greeting Claims · 111 wordsOne of the conversations that came up quite often was from young people from different parts of the country who were in my riding of Vancouver Granville and from some of my constituents who had been travelling across the country over the summer. The theme that kept coming up, particularly from some of the folks in the skilled trades, was that they would love to be able to work in other parts of the country. In fact, I was speaking to a young man from Montreal who said that he would love to be able to work in British Columbia for four or five years, but his credentials are not recognized. Reasoning · 45 wordsThis is something that a lot of us hear in our communities from Canadians from coast to coast to coast who want to work in different parts of the country and be able to use the skills they have obtained and the education they have. Claims · 186 wordsThis is what my friend from Richmond East—Steveston aims to solve through his private member’s bill.1 This bill is really about three things. It is about modernizing, harmonizing and streamlining credential recognition across this country. We spend incredible amounts of time training people in this country across the provinces in the skills and trades we need from coast to coast to coast, yet barriers created through regulations sometimes make it difficult for folks to take advantage of that and truly celebrate being able to work anywhere in this country. We know there is a need for qualified professionals to work where their skills are needed, and this bill would help to deliver on our commitment to break down internal trade barriers and recognize that Canada can give itself, Vague promiseas the Prime Minister said, “far more than anyone else can take away.”2 When we think about this moment for Canada, we recognize that we are being challenged by our neighbours to the south. We have opportunities presented to us through global partnerships, through increasing trade and through looking at how we develop our sectors here at home. Reasoning · 43 wordsOne of the most important elements of that is ensuring that Canadian workers have the ability to work in whatever part of this country they desire, using the skills and knowledge they have and ensuring that their credentials are recognized across this country. Procedure · 8 wordsIt seems very simple, and indeed it is.Procedure Reasoning · 97 wordsIt is a concept about which any of us who are proudly Canadian would ask, “How we can make sure that skills obtained in British Columbia are transferable to Quebec, Ontario or Atlantic Canada, and vice versa?” If we are serious about economic development in this country, increasing productivity, building the infrastructure we need and competitiveness, it is private members’ bills like this one and decisions like this that will help propel our economy forward. We all know that improved labour mobility ensures that skilled labour shortages, particularly in the housing and infrastructure sectors, can be addressed.Unearned certainty Claims · 49 wordsFor those who have concerns, this bill is not about overreach, but rather about coordination and collaboration. As the member for Richmond East—Steveston has said, this bill would help allow a young person trained in Ontario to be part of the national shipbuilding strategy in Vancouver, 3or vice versa. Reasoning · 29 wordsWhen we think about what we are doing, we are spending time, effort, energy and resources to ensure that we are training workers from coast to coast to coast. Claims · 81 wordsWe announced that we would be modernizing and boosting apprenticeship training in this country to expedite Red Seal certification, with over $330 million in funding over five years.4 We are digitizing the Red Seal program, introducing online exams and digital logbooks and securing credentials to reduce certification timelines, including by creating a single national registered apprenticeship number.5 We are also expanding union training and innovation programs to enable union-run training centres to upgrade facilities, expand capacity and invest in modern equipment.6 Reasoning · 13 wordsThese are all steps that require us to work together across the federation. Positioning · 11 wordsThese are all steps that work toward building a Canada strong.Positioning Reasoning · 216 wordsWhen we look at the future of this country, we know there is an imperative right now to build our east-west economy. We know there is an imperative to be able to trade across this country, to have workers move from any part of this country to another to work, and to ensure that what is getting built in one part of the country benefits the country regardless of whether it is in one province or another. That happens by ensuring that when we are building a one Canadian economy, the workers who reside at the heart of that one Canadian economy have the mobility they need, and the time and effort that have been put in and the investments that have been made through tax dollars so these workers are well-trained are put to good use in the parts of the country that need those workers the most. That mobility must be as seamless as possible, and the flexibility of movement must be there for Canadians. It should not be easier for a Canadian from British Columbia or Quebec to move to a different country. It should be easy for them to move across this country to do the work they want to do in helping to build this country and build our economy strong. Claims · 30 wordsThe realities workers face right now are real. Workers across this country, whether they are working in the softwood lumber industry, in manufacturing in Ontario or in smelters, are challenged. Reasoning · 47 wordsThey are looking for ways for government to step up and make their lives easier. One of those ways, I believe, is for them to find and get work anywhere in this country and use the credentials they have without the onerous process of being certified again. Claims · 35 wordsPeople have put in the time, effort and energy to train up. It is not their fault if through tariffs an industry or a sector is hit hard in a particular part of the country. Reasoning · 38 wordsIt should not be their fault that they cannot move to another part of this country where a job is available, only to know that their credentials will not be recognized because of a system that prevents that. Claims · 44 wordsThis bill would enable those barriers to come down. It would enable those workers to take on more, to serve this country through their work, to be taxpaying citizens, to help boost the economy and to build the things we need in this country. Positioning · 4 wordsThis is on us.Positioning Claims · 80 wordsWe have powers in this legislature, in this place, to make these changes and make the lives of Canadians better. The changes that are being proposed are real. They are meaningful, and they are a process of collaboration. They are about collaboration and working together. They are not about overreach. They are not about taking power away from provinces. They are not about diminishing regions. They are not about minimizing anybody’s ability to feel like their province or region matters. Procedure · 5 wordsIt is quite the opposite.Procedure Claims · 42 wordsThey are about ensuring that the regions, provinces and territories that need workers can attract those workers, that those workers can thrive, that those workers have mobility and that they have the freedom in this country to truly participate in the economy. Reasoning · 165 wordsThat is not a lot to ask. It is not a lot for workers to ask. It is not a lot for Canadians to ask of us, and it requires us to come together. It requires us to work with labour unions. It requires us to work across jurisdictions. It requires us to hear one another through that process. What it boils down to is doing the thing that Canadians have asked of us, not just of this government, but of all parliamentarians. It’s about doing the things that are required to build a strong economy, to reduce the barriers that currently prevent workers from doing the things they need to be able to do, to promote businesses’ ability to hire, to enable businesses to contribute to the economy, to reduce the barriers and friction that businesses are currently feeling and, most importantly, to ensure that we are building a truly east-west economy in this country and that workers are at the heart of it. Claims · 22 wordsWe know that the north-south economy right now, with our partners to the south, is hard. It is difficult. Relations are strained. Procedure · 4 wordsWe all know that, ProcedureUnearned certaintyReasoning · 60 wordsbut it is an opportunity for us to make sure that moving across this country east to west or west to east is easy, that we give Canadians the tools they need and that we give Canadians the types of decisions from this government and in this Parliament that allow them to move freely and work freely across this country. Positioning · 31 wordsThat is incumbent on all of us. This is the moment to put aside the “yes but” way of thinking about things and look at the world by saying “yes and”.PositioningPartly on point Promise · 21 wordsYes, we can do this, and we can protect workers. Yes, we can do this, and we can protect regional economies. Positioning · 26 words“Yes and” is how big things are going to get built in this country, acknowledging that not everything we have in our path forward is perfect.Positioning Promise · 94 wordsWe will build by working together, by reducing barriers across provinces and territories and by ensuring that workers from coast to coast to coast have the ability to be mobile and use the skills and credentials they have, whether it is in British Columbia, Quebec, Atlantic Canada, the Prairies or the north, and can move freely and work freely to build the country they want to build, to build here and to have jobs that pay well to put food on the tables for their families. This is something we can and must do, The ask · 12 wordsand I encourage all members of the House to support this bill.

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