“Mr. Speaker, I am interested in knowing where the Conservative Party lies on this issue. Having a commissioner, as an independent parliamentary officer, would be a very positive step forward. As I have listened to Conservatives speak on the legislation, they have waffled on whether having a commissioner would be a good thing or a bad thing. My question is very specific. Given the nature and importance of the modern treaties, does the Conservative Party support having that independent commissioner?”
Statement grade
A
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Average 90 / 100
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Positioning 20%Procedure 6%Claims 74%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 8 wordsour position is very simple.We want action.PositioningVague promiseProcedure · 5 wordsThat is the bottom line.ProcedureClaims · 67 wordsMy concern with the legislation is that it creates bureaucracy, investigations, reports and a whole lot of time spent looking into things.It does not solve problems.The Auditor General has already identified many problems that exist in Canada’s system, in failures of the government and of the system we have now, 1and yet there has been no action by the government to actually fix those things.Positioning · 10 wordsOur position is very simple.We want to see action.PositioningVague promise