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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 22 wordstoday I want to pay tribute to a great man from my region, someone who made it famous far beyond its borders.ProcedureClaims · 17 wordsClaude Bachand, the Bloc Québécois member of Parliament for Saint‑Jean from 1993 to 2011, has passed away.1Thanks · 7 wordsEveryone knew Claude, Unearned certaintyand everyone liked him.ThanksClaims · 22 wordsIn fact, colleagues from all different parties on Parliament Hill would often ask me about him, even 15 years after he left, 2Thanks · 38 wordsbecause they cared about him so deeply.We know that Claude cared about them too.He was a real people person.Claude was a perfect example of a grassroots MP who had his region’s best interests at heart.ThanksClaims · 32 wordsDuring his tenure, he organized plenty of meetings and extended many invitations, particularly to ambassadors and consuls, so they could get to know and love Saint-Jean just as much as he did.Thanks · 25 wordsOn behalf of the Bloc Québécois, I offer my deepest condolences to his family, his loved ones and the many friends whose lives he touched.Thanks