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Robert Oliphant

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 35 wordstoday, September 21, is World Alzheimer’s Day.1 As a progressive and fatal neurodegenerative disease, Alzheimer’s gradually reduces a person’s ability to think and communicate clearly, remember their loved ones and perform previously routine daily tasks. Positioning · 10 wordsEveryone in this chamber knows someone who faces this reality.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 79 wordsHowever, there is hope. Advances in Alzheimer’s research, as promoted by the national strategy on Alzheimer’s disease and other dementias and as being undertaken in places like Sunnybrook Research Institute in my riding of Don Valley West, continue to improve the quality of life of those with the disease. The Alzheimer Society of Canada is central to these advances. Through advocacy and research initiatives, they are helping to realize a future without Alzheimer’s. Next year is their 50th anniversary.2 Thanks · 12 wordsI wish them well, congratulate them and celebrate their work and endeavours.Thanks

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