“Mr. Speaker, let me give an example. The women entrepreneurship loan fund was supposed to help women start and grow their businesses. After filing an ATIP that took 915 days to receive, I learned that the Women’s Enterprise Organizations of Canada met only 6% of application targets and 7% of loan targets, despite receiving millions of dollars from Canadians. Canadians expect results from their taxpayer dollars, not more spending on consultants. Why will the government not cut taxes, help entrepreneurs and save money for Canadians and our small businesses?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 77. The grade is held to 76, 30 above Relevance.
76 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 17%Claims 41%Reasoning 32%Promise 11%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 13 wordsI first want to welcome all of my colleagues back to the House.GreetingClaims · 19 wordsThe Minister of Small Business and I spent the summer holding consultations with a strong focus on women entrepreneurship.1Reasoning · 20 wordsWhat we can say is that the strategy to grow our economy cannot succeed without the full participation of women.Claims · 12 wordsTo date, the women entrepreneurship strategy has helped 600,000 women in Canada.2Reasoning · 4 wordsThat strategy is working, Promise · 8 wordsand we will continue to build on it.Partly on pointVague promise