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Gregor Robertson

101 words · 10 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Jacob Mantle (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, this summer, I hosted young Canadians to talk about planning and saving to buy their first home, but they feel they will never own a home. They are depressed. They are dejected. They are defeated. The Prime Minister promised he would build 500,000 new homes at speeds never seen, but last week, the Minister of Housing said that the government has committed to, not built, only 19,000 homes. The Conservative plan to save Canadians money on housing will tie federal dollars to faster permits and take the taxes off new homes. Minister, your plan is not working. Why not save Canadians money—”
Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 14%Claims 69%Positioning 11%Promise 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 14 wordsit is good to be back in the House and to see my colleagues.Greeting Claims · 39 wordsWe are absolutely focused on getting housing built for young Canadians and making sure they are not paying GST on their first-time home purchases.1 This is a move that was not supported by the Conservatives across the way, unfortunately.2 Positioning · 6 wordsThey should be consistent, at least.PositioningOff point Claims · 15 wordsRents are coming down across Canada. Average rents have been down for 23 straight months.3 Positioning · 5 wordsAffordability is coming our way.Positioning Claims · 16 wordsWe are focused on building more housing.Vague promise Build Canada Homes is rolling it out at pace.4 Promise · 6 wordsWe will continue to do so.Partly on pointVague promise

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