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François-Philippe Champagne

118 words · 7 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Daniel Gobeil (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to wish everyone a happy first day of the fall session. Last week, Canada welcomed the world. Investors from nearly 30 countries, managing more than $100 trillion in assets, came to Canada because they see what the people of Chicoutimi—Le Fjord saw when they sent me here. They see Canada’s economic strength and ambition, and the whole world wants to invest in it. Can the Minister of Finance provide an update on how Canada is leveraging its tremendous advantages to unleash historic levels of investment?”
Statement grade
B–
73 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 25%Procedure 6%Claims 49%Positioning 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 29 wordsI would like to begin by congratulating my colleague on his election and telling the people of Chicoutimi—Le Fjord that they will have a strong voice here in Ottawa.ThanksVague promise Procedure · 4 wordsMy colleague is right.Procedure Claims · 23 wordsWe are entering this economic period from a position of strength and confidence. Canada has what the world needs, and investors are noticing, 2Procedure · 3 wordsas he said.Procedure Claims · 35 wordsWe have the talent, we have the industries, we have the critical minerals, we have the energy, and we are the only G7 country that has a free trade agreement with every other G7 country.1 Positioning · 24 wordsLet us seize this opportunity. Let us be as ambitious as the folks in these industries, and let us build a strong Canada together.PositioningPartly on point

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