“Madam Speaker, from what I understand from my colleague’s remarks, he is afraid that the legislation will result in reports but no concrete action and thinks that it lacks sufficient teeth or enforcement mechanisms to ensure that results are achieved. Could he give me an example of something that could really strengthen the bill?”
Statement grade
A
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 93 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 15%Claims 47%Aside 8%Reasoning 29%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Positioning · 15 wordsthe government’s principal direction with this legislation is a little misguided, or a lot misguided.PositioningClaims · 32 wordsThere are commissioners negotiating and treaty negotiators within the departments themselves.I just visited a nation this summer that said it was insulted by the government sending a young, first-time public servant, Aside · 8 wordsand I feel sorry for that public servant, AsideClaims · 8 wordsbut it was an insult to those nations.Reasoning · 28 wordsI think the government should be concentrating on the department negotiators themselves, rather than a mechanism it knows is set up for failure to ultimately hold it accountable, Claims · 6 wordswhich is going to go nowhere.
