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François-Philippe Champagne

187 words · 18 sentences · 20 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, I reflect on my constituents and what they want. We have a Prime Minister who has been leading a government that talks a great deal about building a stronger, healthier Canada, but that does not leave out the important issue of affordability. I think about one of the very first actions the new government took, which was to get rid of the carbon tax and then to provide a tax break to over 20 million Canadians. Today, the Minister of Finance has provided a true reflection of what every Liberal member of Parliament has been asking for: to provide additional tax relief in the form of the gas tax to address the issue of affordability, something I know he and my colleagues are very passionate about.”
Statement grade
B–
Average 71 / 100
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Thanks 10%Positioning 25%Claims 46%Promise 20%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 18 wordsI just want to compliment my colleague. He is a true voice for our government in the House.Thanks Positioning · 3 wordsHe is right.Positioning Claims · 6 wordsThis is one of the measures. Positioning · 8 wordsWe understand that affordability is front and centre, PositioningClaims · 80 wordsand we have been acting on all fronts.Vague promise Canadians are concerned about the end of the week and the end of the month, with the price of food, the price of rent and the price of gas. He is right that we have a suite of measures to help Canadians. We introduced the Canada groceries and essentials benefit.1 We cut income taxes for 22 million Canadians.2 We cancelled the consumer carbon tax, 3and we provided GST relief for first-time homebuyers.4 Positioning · 13 wordsAt every step of the way, we have been there to support Canadians.Positioning Promise · 30 wordsThe message is very loud and clear that we are going to be there for them.Partly on pointVague promise We are going to build Canada strong.Vague promise We are going to do that together. Positioning · 22 wordsWe should all be proud of what we can achieve in this country. We support each other. We build for the future.Positioning Promise · 7 wordsWe are going to make Canada strong.Off pointVague promise

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