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Jean-Denis Garon

165 words · 13 sentences · 18 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, it is encouraging to see that we are getting wide-spectrum support, working in collaboration with the Conservatives, the Bloc and the New Democrats. It would appear as if the legislation will, in fact, be passing. The biggest benefactors will be Canadians from coast to coast to coast. They will benefit because of collaboration within the House on a good initiative. Would the member opposite not agree that one thing we could do would be to look to our provincial counterparts and suggest that they too provide some excise tax relief on gas?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
The ask 7%Reasoning 24%Claims 43%Procedure 10%Positioning 16%

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Madam Speaker, The ask · 12 wordsI certainly think that the federal government should mind its own business, Reasoning · 9 wordsand I certainly think the policy is worth examining. Claims · 7 wordsI believe it is going to pass. Procedure · 4 wordsThat goes without saying.Procedure Claims · 39 wordsMy colleague says that this money will go into the pockets of all Canadians.1 I spent 20 minutes explaining that this might not be entirely true and that it should be quantified. My colleague wants us to work together, Positioning · 27 wordsbut it is that type of rhetoric, that type of line recited from memory for the media, and that sort of triviality that undermines our parliamentary work.Positioning Claims · 25 wordsIt is going to pass. The Conservatives will vote in favour of this policy. Most people here will vote for the bill; we know that.Partly on pointUnearned certainty Procedure · 7 wordsNow, we need to look further ahead.Procedure Reasoning · 22 wordsWhat will we do next time? What will we do if the situation in Iran is not resolved in six months’ time?Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsThat is the real question, ProcedureReasoning · 8 wordsand that is why we have parliamentary committees.Partly on point

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