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François-Philippe Champagne

74 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, while the Liberals are spending billions of dollars on consultations, corporate subsidies and costly projects, we Conservatives have identified over $150 billion in savings. That is nearly $10,000 per family to help shrink the debt, reduce taxes and save Canadians money. Will the government cut spending on consultants and corporate subsidies, eliminate the industrial carbon tax and adopt the Conservative economic action plan?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 15%Procedure 8%Claims 31%Promise 24%The ask 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 11 wordsI know it’s Tuesday and my colleague needs some good news.AsidePartly on point Procedure · 6 wordsLet us talk about economic growth: ProcedureClaims · 23 words1.6%, 1.5%, 1.4%, 1.2%, 0.8%.1 Those are the the other G7 countries’ second-quarter growth rates. Canada’s was 3.3%, the highest in the G7.2 Promise · 18 wordsTogether, we are going to build Canada strong.Vague promise Together, we will build the strongest economy in the G7.Vague promise The ask · 16 wordsI hope the Conservatives will get on board with our plan to build Canada strong together.Partly on point

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