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François-Philippe Champagne

96 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Melissa Lantsman (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is a day into the session, and there is nothing from the government to fix the affordability crisis on rent, on mortgages and on groceries. This is at a time when Canadians pay more in taxes than they do for bare essentials: Canadians such Olesya, who told me that she is going into credit card debt just to cover rent and food for her family, or Ariella, a student who wonders if she will ever be able to live independently and own a home. Will the government commit today to adopting our Conservative economic plan to save Olesya and Ariella money by lowering debt, taxes and the cost of living for both of them?”
Statement grade
C
Average 63 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 46%Claims 24%The question 30%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 21 wordswe will take no lessons from the Conservatives. There is no way we will take lessons from them. Canadians know better.PositioningOff pointUnearned certainty Claims · 23 wordsThey know that we have been acting on the price of rent, on the price of food, Vague promiseand on the price of fuel. The question · 29 wordsThe question that people are asking today is whether, instead of using talking points, the Conservatives will do the right thing and support us to suspend the fuel tax.1 Positioning · 23 wordsThat is what they want to see.Partly on pointUnearned certainty On this side of the House, Canadians know we have their back today and every day.PositioningOff pointVague promise

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