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Wayne Long

62 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Richard Bragdon (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, a young lady who contacted me was wondering how her family was going to make ends meet, let alone provide a Christmas for her children with her husband now facing unemployment. We know that forestry mills are facing huge competitive disadvantages here in Canada, namely because of tariffs, over-regulation and the industrial carbon tax, which costs the mill in Nackawic over $2 million a year. Will the government commit to removing the barriers for our businesses so that this young lady and many others like her can have some hope for a brighter future?”
Statement grade
C–
Average 58 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 15%Positioning 31%Promise 55%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 9 wordsagain, I applaud the member’s leadership on this issue.Thanks Positioning · 19 wordsOur thoughts are certainly with the workers and their families who are affected by the closure of AV Nackawic.Positioning Promise · 34 wordsWe are going to work with the province.Vague promise We are working with leadership in the community to find a solution.Vague promise We are going to keep fighting for the workers affected by this terrible closure.Partly on pointVague promise

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