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François-Philippe Champagne

117 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Jessica Fancy (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, in the face of rising fuel prices driven by global instability, Canadians deserve real relief. I heard this from the families and businesses in my riding of South Shore—St. Margarets throughout the summer. They benefited from our government’s decision to suspend the fuel excise tax last spring, and they are hoping to see it extended. I have a question for the finance minister that I am hearing from my constituents. How are we helping Canadians pay less at the pump so they can keep more money in their pockets?”
Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 9%Claims 19%Positioning 15%Promise 42%The ask 16%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 10 wordsI want to compliment my colleague from South Shore—St. Margarets.Thanks Claims · 16 wordsI have good news for her constituents. In fact, it is good news for all Canadians. Positioning · 14 wordsThe message we are sending to Canadians is that we are there for them.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise Promise · 49 wordsWe are going to support them at a time of need with a measure that is immediate, broad-based, Vague promiseand tangible and meaningful for families. I have the pleasure to announce in this House that we are going to extend the suspension of the excise fuel tax until January 2027.1 Positioning · 3 wordsThis is meaningful.Positioning Claims · 6 wordsThis is going to help families. The ask · 19 wordsI hope every member of this House will stand up and vote in favour of it to support Canadians.

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