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Procedure 15%Claims 62%Thanks 23%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 22 wordsI rise today to mark the 30th anniversary of an organization in the community of Vaudreuil that is particularly important to me.1ProcedureClaims · 92 wordsSince 1996, Hébergement La Passerelle has been providing confidential and anonymous support to women and children experiencing domestic violence, 2while working tirelessly to prevent it.The outstanding team led by Véronique Girard plays an essential role in our community, making a difference for so many families.3The safe place that La Passerelle provides for women and their children escaping conjugal violence in my community of Vaudreuil serves not only as an immediate refuge, but as a space to breathe, plan next steps and find a more permanent, safer place to call home.Thanks · 35 wordsOn behalf of our community of Vaudreuil, I want to thank the entire team at Hébergement La Passerelle for their three decades of service.Their work is invaluable, and we are deeply grateful to them.Thanks