“Mr. Speaker, after 11 years of Liberal rule, even full-time workers are having a hard time making ends meet at the end of the month. According to the National Payroll Institute, half of all employed Canadians now report spending all, or sometimes more, of their net pay. That means that families are being forced to go into debt just to put food on the table. The Conservatives have identified over $150 billion in unnecessary Liberal spending. That works out to $10,000 per family. Will the Liberals adopt our Conservative plan to save families money?”
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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 14 wordsI am going to help my colleague with his next letter to his constituents.AsideClaims · 66 wordsFirst off, he should remind them that we have cut taxes for 22 million Canadians.1I hope he will mention that to his constituents.Second, I hope he will remind them that we have extended the federal gas tax holiday, 2which will help people across the country.I hope he will also talk about the Canada groceries and essentials benefit, which will help 12 million Canadians.3Positioning · 11 wordsThese are concrete, immediate and targeted measures that will help Canadians.Positioning
