“Madam Speaker, I would note that there is a lot of “we will” in the response. The government has been in place for over 10 years, and I have to say that if history is any indication of trying to get forced labour out of the government, it is like pulling teeth. It is incredibly difficult. Attempts to get Bill S-211 across the line took a very long time. Then, once we had it passed, the coming into force took an eternity, never mind the office of the corps, which was a thing the government bragged a lot about, and then it took eons for it to set it all up. What assurances can this member give us that, in fact, the Liberals will take this very seriously, and will Bill C-35 be able to be implemented in the short term?”
Statement grade
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 57. The grade is held to 56, 30 above Signal.
56 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 40%Thanks 26%Promise 30%Aside 3%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Positioning · 69 wordsyou and I have been in this place for a long time, and we know that while our government has been in place, we have acted with resolve and with intelligence on this issue, unlike the previous government, which was in place for 10 years before us and never lifted a finger to solve this issue.As such, we do not take lessons from Conservatives on this at all.PositioningOff pointThanks · 45 wordsI want to commend my former colleague, the Hon. John McKay, who persisted with this issue to the point where our government was able to act with effectiveness and with an assured nature to make sure that supply chains continue to be safer and safer.ThanksPromise · 32 wordsThe work was not done, so we will continue to make sure that we have effective enforcement and a competitive Canadian economy.Vague promiseWe will also ensure there is transparency in supply chains, Vague promiseAside · 6 wordsand I use the verb “will”, AsidePromise · 20 wordswhich is absolutely chosen by me to assure all members of this House that we will get the job done.Vague promise