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Yves Perron

175 words · 14 sentences · 17 clauses

Replying to Greg Fergus (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, first of all, I want to commend my esteemed colleague from Berthier—Maskinongé. He is a person I respect so much. Before he became a politician, he was a member of a very noble profession. He taught history, if I recall our conversations correctly. I have a question for him as a man who is very familiar with history. Would it be possible, in this day and age, to build something like the national railroad in a short period of time, in this country, with all the regulations and timelines we have today? Are we not capable of taking action to do things that are really important for Quebec and for Canada?”
Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 3%Anecdote 14%Aside 11%Procedure 3%Claims 24%Reasoning 16%Positioning 7%The ask 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 5 wordsI respect my MP too.Thanks Anecdote · 25 wordsWhenever I am here for work, I stay in an apartment located in his riding.1 That makes him my MP. I receive his householders too.Anecdote Aside · 20 wordsThey have far too much writing for my taste, since they are in both languages, but that is his choice.AsideOff point Procedure · 2 wordsI digress.Procedure Claims · 34 wordsHe brought up the topic of railroads. No one wants to revert to using the labour involved in building that railroad or the conditions of the time. That is what we are discussing today. Reasoning · 28 wordsI was saying that we are not against progress or construction but, over the years, we have adopted standards. We have adopted social standards that must be respected. Procedure · 3 wordsThat is important.Procedure Positioning · 12 wordsPersonally, I think that the Liberal government is triggering a major rollback, PositioningThe ask · 28 wordsbut I am counting on the member who represents me when I am on the Hill to protect my interests and make my voice heard in this caucus. Claims · 8 wordsI know that he cannot do that here, The ask · 10 wordsbut I ask him to do that in his caucus.Off point

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