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Yves Perron

124 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Bardish Chagger (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, I listen to the debates in the House, and I know that the Bloc Québécois likes to say that there is always one Liberal member who asks questions. There will be several of us today, because I really appreciated that speech. I think that here in the House, we have the opportunity to work together. It is easy to say that we have support or that we do not, but I think that what makes a difference is providing constructive feedback. I would like the member to tell me how we can work better together and how we can ensure that we represent our constituents better in the House, because that is what my constituents in Waterloo want. I want to find ways to work together, and I think that is also the Prime Minister’s approach.”
Statement grade
B+
82 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 6%Aside 14%Positioning 22%The ask 41%Reasoning 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 8 wordsI want to thank my colleague from Waterloo.Thanks Aside · 17 wordsSeveral members in a row have been practising their French. I am delighted. We can work together.Aside Positioning · 22 wordsI was saying to the previous speaker that I know that the Liberals are constrained in what they can say in Parliament.Positioning The ask · 51 wordsHowever, I hope that these people, who are smart, who are listening and who seem to understand the arguments we are putting forward, will convey to their caucus that we believe the bill should be amended. I hope that the committee study will give us sufficient latitude to amend certain provisions. Reasoning · 15 wordsThe bill is so significant and harmful that I struggle to envision us supporting it. Positioning · 5 wordsI am normally very accommodating, PositioningReasoning · 6 wordsbut this bill goes pretty far.

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