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Sherry Romanado

132 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Michael Cooper (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, my question was about pump and dump. It was about corruption. Here we have the Liberal government funnelling $20 million to Maritime Launch Services, bailing out a nearly bankrupt company, upon which the chair of the board immediately sells three million of his shares, walking away with $1.8 million. Does the parliamentary secretary consider that to be normal? Is that just business as usual with the Liberals? How can the parliamentary secretary justify this type of corruption?”
Statement grade
C
Average 64 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 5%Claims 34%Positioning 39%Promise 23%

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Procedure · 6 wordsLet us be clear, Mr. Speaker.Procedure Claims · 45 wordsSovereign space launch capabilities are a strategic imperative for Canada. Canada is currently the only G7 country without sovereign space launch capabilities.1 We are in the process of addressing that strategic gap.Vague promise Our approach will enable Canada to exercise more control over essential space infrastructure. Positioning · 51 wordsThis is about building Canada strong. It is about investing in Canadian industry, unlocking the full potential of our innovation economy and creating high-quality jobs here at home. It is about developing the critical infrastructure and capabilities that strengthen our sovereignty, enhance our security and support a more resilient Canadian economy.Positioning Promise · 30 wordsWe will build in Canada, we will invest in Canadian workers and Canadian innovation, Vague promiseand we will ensure Canada remains a strong, sovereign and trusted leader in the space domain.Partly on pointVague promise

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