“I, too, would like to thank my colleague from Ontario for his contribution to this debate. At the beginning of his speech, he pointed out that the safeguards will still be there but that we are going to find a way to reduce delays and make a decision, whether positive or negative. I would like him to expand on that.”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 76. The grade is held to 68, 30 above Signal.
68 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 57%Reasoning 29%Promise 13%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 78 wordslet us imagine going for a driver’s licence.We have to get our driver’s licence in one place, go to another place to get our picture taken, go to another place to get eye-exam certified and then go back to the first place and start that process over again.By consolidating the processes and making the departments work together concurrently instead of consecutively, we can get things done quicker.We can get our driver’s licence a lot sooner.AnecdoteReasoning · 40 wordsSaying we are going to get things done in a year means it is a yes or no in a year.It does not mean it is a yes in a year.It means yes or no in a year.Promise · 18 wordsWe just need to be more efficient and move faster so we can grow our economy for Canadians.Vague promise
