Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Greg Fergus

151 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 105 wordsmembers of Council 5281 of the Knights of Columbus have been active in our community since 1962.1 Over the decades, the Aylmer Knights of Columbus have given generously of their time and energy to build a stronger, more caring and supportive community. Their actions are guided by a simple conviction: to care for one another. Whether they are holding a fundraising campaign, helping a family, hosting a community activity or engaging in a quiet act of kindness, charity remains at the heart of their work. This way of doing things has been passed down from one generation to the next in Aylmer for 65 years. Thanks · 46 wordsOn October 17, let us celebrate all those who built this council and those who continue this work and ensure its future.2 I wish Aylmer’s Council 5281 of the Knights of Columbus continued success and thank them for their 65 years of service to our community.3Thanks

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