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Mona Fortier

135 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

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Greeting 17%Claims 41%Thanks 19%Reasoning 13%The ask 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 10 wordsglory to my fair flag, the flag of Ontario’s francophones.Greeting Claims · 38 wordsToday, we are celebrating the 51st anniversary of our beautiful Franco-Ontarian flag, 1which was recognized 25 years ago by the Ontario legislature as our official emblem.2 The flag remains a powerful and unifying symbol of the Franco-Ontarian community. Thanks · 25 wordsAs a proud Franco-Ontarian, I want to pay tribute to all the francophones and francophiles who contribute to enriching our culture and promoting our identity.Thanks Reasoning · 17 wordsPreserving our heritage, making our voices heard and asserting our place within Ontario society remain collective responsibilities. Claims · 18 wordsToday is a day to celebrate our community’s vitality with confidence and determination, while looking ahead to tomorrow. The ask · 14 wordsTo put the focus where it belongs, we need to stand up and celebrate. Greeting · 13 wordsLong live the Franco-Ontarian community, long live the francophonie and happy Franco-Ontarian Day.Greeting

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