“Mr. Speaker, the region I represent in northern Ontario is an economic engine for all of Canada with mining, forestry and agriculture. Removing all fuel taxes until Canada Day would improve productivity and reduce the costs that are passed on to Canadians. This would also go a long way for individual families in Hearst, Kapuskasing, Smooth Rock Falls, Cochrane, Matheson, Kirkland Lake, Timmins, Chapleau and all the villages around. Will the Liberals adopt our plan to remove all fuel taxes?”
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordsI would like to take this opportunity to wish my colleague a happy Franco-Ontarian Day.1GreetingProcedure · 13 wordsIn answer to his question, I would also like to make two points.ProcedureClaims · 54 wordsThis week, our government introduced two very important bills that go hand in hand.We introduced Bill C-38, 2which comprehensively addresses affordability issues, and I could name others, considering the numerous initiatives introduced over the past few months.We also introduced Bill C-39, 3which is going to create good jobs and strengthen our economy.Vague promisePositioning · 8 wordsThat is what Canadians in our ridings want.PositioningPartly on point