“Mr. Speaker, there has hardly been a more challenging time for Canada’s small wineries, craft breweries and distilleries. My bill, Bill C-262, would allow Canada Post and other carriers to ship their products directly to Canadians across provincial borders. When I tabled my bill this past March, the minister responsible said he supported the goal of removing these barriers. With President Trump’s ban on Canadian alcohol imports taking effect next week, our small producers need action. When will the Liberals get off the sidelines, adopt my bill and let our producers sell their made-in-Canada products directly to Canadians?”
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Average 74 / 100
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Claims 20%Positioning 35%Promise 45%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 13 wordsmy colleague and I have had meetings about this.We have worked together.Positioning · 23 wordsWhen people on the other side of the aisle work together, it works okay.When people work with provinces and territories, it works.PositioningPartly on pointPromise · 28 wordsNext week, we are going to be sitting down with the provinces and territories, working chapter by chapter to get rid of interprovincial tariffs, including for direct-to-consumer alcohol.1Claims · 8 wordsAll the federal barriers are gone for interprovincial.2Positioning · 13 wordsNow it is time for the provinces and territories to do their part.PositioningPromise · 19 wordsI am willing to work with our colleagues and work with the provinces and territories to make that happen.Partly on pointVague promise