“Mr. Speaker, this week is Gender Equality Week. It is an opportunity to celebrate how far we have come and to acknowledge how far we still have to go. The full and equal participation of women is essential to building a strong Canada for all and to reaching our goal of becoming the strongest economy in the G7. Can the parliamentary secretary tell the House how our government intends to advance gender equality in Canada?”
Statement grade
C–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 59. The grade is held to 55, 30 above Signal.
55 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 25%Positioning 47%Claims 14%Reasoning 14%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 22 wordsI would like to thank my very determined colleague, who is proud to serve in a government that includes 71 female members.1ThanksPositioning · 41 wordsThese women are determined—I use this word for want of a slightly stronger one—to continue to advance gender equality.Vague promiseNow that Parliament is back, I am of course going to call on all members of Parliament to work on this issue.PositioningClaims · 12 wordsTo date, we have invested nearly $1 billion to advance this issue.2Reasoning · 12 wordsWhat would help most is to support social programs that primarily benefit—Partly on point