“Mr. Speaker, watching the recent investment summit, I had a sense of déjà vu. At COP26, then UN special envoy on climate finance, our current Prime Minister, announced the Glasgow Financial Alliance for Net Zero. The world’s largest banks and investment firms committed over $100 trillion for the transition to net zero. Five years later, the only net zero is the investments promised by these firms. How will the investments promised at the recent Toronto summit differ from the Glasgow promises?”
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Reasoning 24%Claims 62%Positioning 15%
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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 21 wordswe do not need to choose between strong environmental protections and building major projects efficiently.We can and must do both.Claims · 55 wordsThat is why we are working with provinces and territories to cut duplication and make assessments more efficient, Vague promisewhile upholding Canada’s world-leading environmental standards and respecting indigenous rights.On top of this, we introduced environmental mapping in our nature strategy to integrate conservation and project planning, to keep nature protected and to build Canada right.1Positioning · 13 wordsOur focus remains on building well, streamlining processes and cutting duplication, not corners.PositioningPartly on point