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Brad Redekopp

171 words · 14 sentences · 19 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, we need to look at the larger picture here. We have seen a great example. Through the relationships of the Prime Minister, along with a very proactive cabinet and caucus colleagues, we are going out there saying that Canada wants to see investment. We want to see major projects developed, to the degree where we got half a trillion dollars on the table in the Toronto conference. That is a historic amount of money. When we take a look at Bill C-39, it is all part of it. Building a stronger and healthier economy is what this Prime Minister and every Liberal member of Parliament is all about. Does the Conservative Party support Bill C-39?”
Statement grade
B–
73 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 51%Reasoning 26%Procedure 5%Positioning 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 20 wordsit is one thing to say half a trillion dollars was talked about, 1but we have lost a trillion dollars.2 Reasoning · 33 wordsIf we lost a trillion and we get a half a trillion back, I do not know if that is a very good deal. I do not think I would want that deal.Partly on point Procedure · 8 wordsI think the proof is in the pudding.Procedure Claims · 61 wordsThe Prime Minister talked about this new pipeline project.3 The Liberals removed all the barriers. They went to industry and said, “Please come and build this. Put your money on the table. Let’s build this project”, but it did not happen, 4because there are still too many barriers. Sure, there is lots of talk. Of course, people want to do things. Reasoning · 12 wordsI would say to the member that hope is not a strategy. Positioning · 30 wordsWe all want all kinds of things, but we only get the things we deserve. With our bureaucracy, with our red tape right now, we are getting what we deserve, PositioningClaims · 7 wordsand that is a lack of investment.Partly on point

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