“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister promised that he would double homebuilding, but once again, it was all talk and no results. In fact, homebuilding is down, and today, Habitat for Humanity International published a report showing that 56% of Canadians who do not own homes believe they never will. That is the highest number out of 22 surveyed countries. Also, two-thirds of Canadians have skipped other payments so that they can pay for their housing. Canadians are paying for this costly Prime Minister. When will he adopt our plan to build homes and not bureaucracy?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 75. The grade is held to 73, 30 above Relevance.
73 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 80%Procedure 4%Positioning 15%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 19 wordsthe Leader of the Opposition, this summer, when asked what he would do about building housing, said absolutely nothing.Off pointProcedure · 4 wordsThat was his response.ProcedurePositioning · 11 wordsLeave it to the market to solve all our housing woes.PositioningOff pointClaims · 42 wordsWe have established Build Canada Homes to build affordable non-market housing.1We have over 19,000 homes under way right now.2We are building Canada strong and we are offering Canadians in Ontario up to $200,000 off the price of a new home.3Positioning · 3 wordsThis is leadership.PositioningClaims · 12 wordsWe are delivering that.Vague promiseWe are delivering the homes that Canadians need.Off pointVague promise