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Jacques Ramsay

127 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Scott Reid (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the government asked Corrections Canada to make cuts to save $132 million over the next three years. To that end, Corrections Canada has eliminated 25 community employment coordinators. These are the people who actually help prisoners find jobs after they are in prison. Firing these employment coordinators saved $2.7 million. Now, it seems to me the wrong cuts are being made. Eliminating a totally unnecessary and ineffective program like CORCAN would save at least $198 million, and that is just the salaries, over the next three years and would save the jobs of the employment coordinators, who actually make a difference in finding jobs for ex-convicts and making our communities safer. Does the government have it backwards? Were the researchers at Corrections Canada right when they said, in a report to the minister, “CORCAN is an outdated model”?”
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordsI do not share that opinion.Positioning Claims · 22 wordsI think CORCAN does help the labour market, and it helps inmates to achieve their rehabilitation and be productive in our society. Positioning · 24 wordsI would just remind the hon. member that as members of Parliament, we all want safer communities for our friends, loved ones and constituents.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 75 wordsHaving inmates going into permanent jobs, jobs that are giving them skills and a salary, is a good way to prevent reoffending. It is in pursuit of this goal that I am pleased to highlight the positive interventions provided by CORCAN that provide offenders with the skills and competencies necessary and that are aligned with labour needs. As stated, there is a direct correlation between an offender’s ability to find employment and rates of recidivism.1

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