A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 92%Reasoning 3%The ask 5%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 127 wordsrepresentatives of Breast Cancer Canada are on Parliament Hill today for the organization’s awareness month.1There were 31,000 Canadians diagnosed this year alone.2One in eight women faces this battle.3We all know many who have survived and many who have not.Unearned certaintyMost impressive in my world is my friend Kim MacDonald, also here today for the awareness advocacy.Kim is now 10 years cancer-free.4She recovered, but Kim has never stopped speaking up for everyone else affected by breast cancer.She uses her platform as a popular Weather Network personality to talk about her journey.5She travels to conferences to cover various breakthroughs, and she raises money for more research.There is progress, but we know there are still gaps in cancer care across this country.Unearned certaintyReasoning · 5 wordsWe need a national approach.The ask · 9 wordsWe should wear the pink ribbon this month, donate, Claims · 25 wordsand support the bill I will sponsor when it passes in the Senate, an act to establish a national framework for women’s health in Canada.6