Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 18%Claims 50%Reasoning 14%Thanks 17%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 19 wordsI rise today to recognize Trevor Greenway, editor-in-chief of The Low Down to Hull and Back News in Wakefield.2ProcedureClaims · 53 wordsTrevor won first place at the Canadian Community Newsmedia Awards for his powerful reporting on health and suicide in the Gatineau hills, in particular among men.1Mental health is important, and his reporting gave a voice to grieving families and shone a light on the barriers people still face today when seeking help.Reasoning · 15 wordsThis award confirms something our community has known for a long time: Unearned certaintyLocal journalism matters.Thanks · 18 wordsCongratulations to Trevor for his well-deserved national recognition.I thank Trevor for giving a voice to our community.Thanks