“Mr. Speaker, I appreciate the member’s comments on affordability. About an hour ago, the Prime Minister made an announcement on energy efficiency in my home province of Quebec, announcing $2 billion to retrofit 820,000 homes, with low-income Canadians getting up to $10,000 for heat pumps. This is going to be a reduction in emissions of 25 megatonnes, and it is going to increase the comfort in homes. I am curious. Does the member for Edmonton Strathcona think heat pump subsidies are good for Canadians and good for her constituents in Edmonton?”
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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 50 wordswe installed a heat pump in my home in Edmonton just this summer, 1and I am absolutely delighted with it.We also have solar panels.2However, let us be realistic.I have a very good job where I can actually afford to pay for these things and to install them.AnecdoteReasoning · 57 wordsWe need to do everything we can to provide supports to those folks who cannot afford to retrofit their homes.Any part we can take in making sure that Canadians can retrofit their homes, and the buildings in our communities, helps.It is insufficient, though, if it is not done in a way that Canadians can access.Claims · 19 wordsI have not had an opportunity to look at the Prime Minister’s announcement that he made an hour ago.Partly on pointPositioning · 27 wordsOf course, as always, I would prefer that the Prime Minister share his thoughts with parliamentarians in the House.That does not seem to be his priority, PositioningOff pointPromise · 18 wordsbut certainly, I will pay attention and will read it after I am done in the House today.Partly on point