“Madam Speaker, this week, the Prime Minister’s parliamentary secretary told the House that everything is going well in Canada, that the cost of housing is dropping and that job creation is up across the country. Meanwhile, the Prime Minister recently asked us to give him a break because he just got here, even though he has been here for 18 months already. Today, we learned that 50,000 jobs were lost in Quebec alone in September. Does anyone on the other side of the House have the courage to stand up, look Quebeckers in the eye and tell them that losing 50,000 jobs in one month is good news?”
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Madam Speaker, Claims · 93 wordswe are working hard with the premiers of all of the provinces and territories, across party lines, to build a stronger economy.Vague promiseBecause of this co-operation, this summer, we were able to launch the Churchill Falls project, 1which will save Quebec taxpayers $200 billion and create 23,000 jobs.23Other examples include the Davie shipyard, which will create 5,000 jobs, 4and the Via Rail project that is being carried out by Alstom in La Pocatière, which will create 700 jobs.5We are investing in housing and infrastructure to create tens of thousands of jobs.Vague promisePositioning · 14 wordsWe are there for working Canadians and Quebeckers.That is why they elected us.Positioning