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Caroline Desrochers

104 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Jason Groleau (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, we are in a cost of living crisis. People are struggling to keep a roof over their heads. Gas is expensive. The cost of diesel has doubled in a year, and home prices have tripled in the last 10 or 11 years of Liberal governance. As if that were not bad enough, we are also learning that people are losing their jobs. In the past two months, August and September, 68,000 jobs were lost in Quebec alone. The Liberals are completely out of touch with the reality facing Canadians. Will they stop sending money to other countries and start taking care of the people here at home?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 13%Claims 77%Positioning 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI would like to set the record straight and get back to the facts.Procedure Claims · 80 wordsYes, the economic situation is difficult. Yes, we live in a volatile world. I would point out, however, that housing construction has increased, including in Montreal.1 Rents have dropped across Canada.2 We have signed agreements with Quebec to build 4,000 housing units.3 We recently launched the Canada rental protection fund to protect our affordable housing stock.4 When it comes to affordability and to helping Quebeckers and Canadians, the truth is that the Conservatives vote against every affordability measure we propose.5Unearned certainty Positioning · 10 wordsIt is hard to take what they are saying seriously.PositioningOff point

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