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Julie Dabrusin

100 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Andrew Lawton (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, the only thing higher than the member’s voice is the Prime Minister’s stock portfolio this week. The Prime Minister is delivering for Liberal insiders, not ordinary Canadians. His $2-billion heat pump announcement yesterday stands to benefit companies like Trane and Enercare. The Prime Minister’s ethics filing shows that he owns shares in Trane, and guess who owns Enercare. It is Brookfield. We know that the Prime Minister’s ethics disclosure shows he has millions of dollars of shares in Brookfield. What is he pumping, heat into Canadian homes or cash into Brookfield?”
Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 24%Claims 55%Reasoning 21%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordssince we are not going to be able to count on Conservatives to tell their constituents how the program works, let me explain it.Positioning Claims · 55 wordsWhat we have done is created a program that will give all homeowners access to $2,000 to $10,000 to buy a heat pump so they can lower their bills.1 On average, that is going to deliver $1,400 a year in savings.2 They will be able to apply online and get a response within 24 hours.3 Reasoning · 21 wordsThat means if their heating conks out, they will be able to get funding to support a new heat pump quickly.Partly on point

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