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Jacques Ramsay

63 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Alex Ruff (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, since October 1, I have multiple constituents receiving notice from the Liberal government’s gun-grab program that they must ship their firearms to the government via Purolator, FedEx or UPS by October 17 in order to receive compensation. All three couriers have refused as they restrict shipping of firearms without prior approval. Did the public safety minister even consider this requirement or is this just a way for the Liberals to keep costs down on this multi-billion-dollar boondoggle? When will the government end its attacks on law-abiding, vetted and licensed firearms owners?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
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Claims 24%The ask 41%Promise 35%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Claims · 15 wordsthe reports we have from most gun owners is that the procedure is going well.1 The ask · 26 wordsIf the member has heard about any specific cases where it is not working, I would invite him to connect with me or with our ministry, Promise · 22 wordsand we will make sure it works.Vague promise We will make every effort to make sure this program works.Vague promise This is our promise.Partly on point

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