Analysis · Question Period answer · beta

François-Philippe Champagne

87 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Tatiana Auguste (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, over the past year, I have had the opportunity to speak with many young Canadians who understand the importance of seizing the opportunities before us to build a better future, one that offers more jobs and opportunities for young people in a stronger, more resilient Canada that is worth fighting for. Could the Minister of Finance inform the House of the next steps in our government’s plan to build that future for young Canadians?”
Statement grade
D+
53 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 22%Positioning 53%Promise 25%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordsI thank the member for Terrebonne for her question and for her commitment to the next generation of Canadians.Thanks Positioning · 46 wordsOn November 5, I will present our government’s next budget, a plan to move Canada forward, attract new investment and create more jobs across the country.1 This budget aims to build a stronger, more independent and more resilient economy, while making life more affordable for Canadians.Positioning Promise · 22 wordsOn November 5, I will present a plan to build Canada strong and ensure that we remain masters in our own house.2Vague promise

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