“Mr. Speaker, I appreciate many of the words, especially the tributes by our members making reference to the disaster that took place in Wainwright. I wonder if the minister can just provide his thoughts. From the last federal election, with our new Prime Minister and 70-plus new members of Parliament, one of the highest priorities was to deal with the Canadian Forces. It is one of the reasons we saw the substantial increase, meeting the 2% GDP. It is one of the reasons we saw raises going to our military personnel and so many investments. This piece of legislation is just a continuation of commitments to our Canadian Forces and the Canadian economy as a whole, that military industrial component in Canada that provides thousands of jobs.”
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 19 wordsmy colleague is a former serving member of the forces, and I thank him very much for his service.ThanksClaims · 31 wordsWhat the member is really indicating is that we made a decision some 14 months ago to transform the Canadian Armed Forces in terms of investments, recruitment, retention and pay packages.1Procedure · 1 wordsOverall, ProcedureClaims · 65 wordsas I mentioned, we made a 2% commitment to spending, $81 billion-plus over the next five years, 2and we have seen results.We have seen, for example, a 61% increase in completed applications to join the Canadian Armed Forces this year as compared with last year.3We have seen recruitment numbers continue at other levels.We have seen retention also continue to augment and ameliorate.Reasoning · 17 wordsWhat we are really doing here is making the requisite investments to recruit, retain, arm and rebuild, Vague promisePositioning · 16 wordsand this is exactly what the Canadian Armed Forces have been waiting for, for some time.Positioning